More impressionable content (word soup) hopefully it grabs employeres eyes or something

config.toml

@@ -77,19 +77,19 @@ theme = "sada"
         title = "Hobbies"
 
         [[params.hobbies.list]]
-        interest = "Playing in e-sports events is heaps fun."
+        interest = "Confectionery and baking"
 
         [[params.hobbies.list]]
-        interest = "Surfing, swimming, and studying surf breaks."
+        interest = "Surfing and ocean swimming"
 
 		[[params.hobbies.list]]
-        interest = "Creating and contributing to libre software."
+        interest = "Creating and contributing to libre software"
 
 		[[params.hobbies.list]]
-        interest = "I like messing around with caligraphy."
+        interest = "Caligraphy and Generative art"
 
     [params.aboutme]
-        description = "\"I would never come before as a complainaint for doing something that I must do\""
+        description = "Developer, Confectioner and amateur confectioner"
 
     [params.experiences]
         icon = "fa-briefcase"
@@ -133,43 +133,43 @@ theme = "sada"
 		url = "https://gitlab.com/shockrah/freechat"
         description = "A free and open source chat platform that respects user freedoms, inpsired by image boards, as an alternative to Discord/Slack. Weekly builds are available on the official Gitlab repository. Built with Rust, Python, MySQL, and Docker."
 
-        [[params.projects.list]]
-        title = "Homebrew Operating system"
-        url = "https://gitlab.com/shockrah/jankos"
-        description = "x86 based operating system written from scratch using C, x86 assembly, and built with GNU Make. A working copy is provided via Gitlab's Continuous Integration/Deployment pipeline with a custom Docker image."
-
 
 		[[params.projects.list]]
 		title = "Generative Art - Programmatic Musings of my Mind"
 		url = "https://gitlab.com/shockrah/generative-art"
-		description = "Generative art samples that I build for fun. Examples of what these look like can be found in the screen-caps folder."
+		description = "Generative art samples that I build for fun. Similar in spirit to my Graphics Engine project however, these mini projects are typically simpler and of course run in any modern browser. Examples of what these look like can be found in the screen-caps folder."
 
         [[params.projects.list]]
 		title = "Graphics Engine"
 		url = "https://gitlab.com/shockrah/gfx-engine"
-		description = "Graphics engine built with SDL2 in C++. Made to serve as a backbone for my own \"for-fun\" experiments like creating an implementation of Boids, fluid simulations, and random obscure math problems I find interesting at the time"
+		description = "Built with a simple enough API this engine allows me to ignore the more technical details of graphics work in order to focus more on the algorithmic side of a problem rather than the technical one. Graphics engine built with SDL2 in C++."
 
 
 		[[params.projects.list]]
-		title = "Comfychan - An Image Board Engine"
+		title = "Discord Community Manager"
-		url = "https://gitlab.com/shockrah/comfychan"
+		url = "https://gitlab.com/shockrah/left-coast-server-bot"
-		description = "An image board ebgine written in Python with Flask and Redis. Built to support NoScript users as well as regular JS users."
+		description = "More than a simple chat bot this bot can, and does, manage multiple game servers making it easy for my own community to organize community game events. It's developement is entirely driven by what the community wants and as such is deployed with downtime-to-a-minimum in mind. Deployments are intelligently made during \"quiet\" times with easy rollbacks, quick deployment times, and good logging as priorities. Built with with NodeJS and Rust with a microservice-architecture."
 
 
         [[params.projects.list]]
         title = "ESP8266 Promiscuous Wifi Detection"
         url = "https://gitlab.com/shockrah/wifi-sens"
-        description = "Wifi scanning via an ESP-8266 and Arduino. Built using reverse engineered Xtensa library features in C."
+        description = "Wifi scanning via an ESP-8266 and Arduino. At the time it was built to collect statistics on unique AMAC addresses found in a given area. Built using reverse engineered Xtensa library features in C."
+
+        [[params.projects.list]]
+        title = "Homebrew Operating system"
+        url = "https://gitlab.com/shockrah/jankos"
+        description = "x86 based operating system written from scratch using C, x86 assembly, and built with GNU Make. A working copy is provided via Gitlab's Continuous Integration/Deployment pipeline with a custom Docker image."
 
         [[params.projects.list]]
         title = "Static Site Generator in Bash"
         url = "https://gitlab.com/shockrah/shockrah-city"
-        description = "Personal blog built automatically built through shell scripts and markdown. All content can be built via a static site generator written in pure Bash script."
+        description = "Personal blog built automatically built through shell scripts and markdown. Content is generated through Pandoc however [my own HTML compiler](https://gitlab.com/shockrah/site-generator) can optionally be used as it is feature complete for markdown support."
 
 		[[params.projects.list]]
 		title = "This Resume Page"
 		url = "https://gitlab.com/shockrah/resume"
-		description = "Built with the Hugo static site generator. I've modified the Sada theme for a better reading flow and deployed with Gitlab's continuous development pipelines."
+		description = "I've built this resume page on my own domain to not rely on services that are out of my control. Depolyment is quick and painless with the continuous deployment pipelines hosted on Gitlab. Built with HTML, Javascript, Markdown, and special [custom Docker image](https://hub.docker.com/repository/docker/shockrah/website/general) all of my websi and mirrored it on Gitlabtes use."
 
 
     # Skills section